Not great... But good...
The only bad thing about this, I think, is that I think you need more of a hook. What IS so special about this character and his fast food job. Lots of people get jobs that are beneath them and see some chick they like while they're there... I would've liked to see something interesting that stands out more... Maybe the girl could say or do something that shows us why she's so cool.
Other than that, the graphics were good. I really like your drawing style. It was kind of refreshing to see an anime drawing style that didn't involve two people mindlessly beating the crap out of each other.